Entry tags:
(no subject)
Well, I just put a new story on Fanfiction.net Fate Made Us Sisters, if anyone wants to go read it and leave reviews like 'OMG11!!! U R Graet! Wat a good story! Rite mor k'' and stuff like that. :)
The second after I posted it, I noticed something amiss with the syntax, and tried to replace it, but last time I checked it was still my first version, so you may notice a couple of glaring errors - wrong commas, and one sentence made it sound like the lake was surrounded by girls, not Lily. Hopefully the proper version will be along shortly.
( Gilmore Girls gabbing, cut for spoilers )
Right. Wasted enough time. Back to work.
The second after I posted it, I noticed something amiss with the syntax, and tried to replace it, but last time I checked it was still my first version, so you may notice a couple of glaring errors - wrong commas, and one sentence made it sound like the lake was surrounded by girls, not Lily. Hopefully the proper version will be along shortly.
( Gilmore Girls gabbing, cut for spoilers )
Right. Wasted enough time. Back to work.