ext_6660 ([identity profile] charliesmum.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] charliesmum 2009-11-19 09:07 pm (UTC)

I've tried to explain that to people - story aside (and it is pretty appalling) the writing is so bad it is frustrating. I know people who can write better in their sleep, and yet SHE got published.

She 'shows not tells' all the bloody time.

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