The writing fits well with the subject matter - it doesn't feel like you're writing from the 21st century, and that's a triumph. The characterizations are well-drawn, and I feel awful for Charlotte, and the sex scene *is* well-handled. You're a really good creative writer, you know that? Brava!
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The writing fits well with the subject matter - it doesn't feel like you're writing from the 21st century, and that's a triumph. The characterizations are well-drawn, and I feel awful for Charlotte, and the sex scene *is* well-handled. You're a really good creative writer, you know that? Brava!