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charliesmum) wrote2005-03-09 03:38 pm
charliesmum) wrote2005-03-09 03:38 pm
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Well, I just put a new story on Fanfiction.net Fate Made Us Sisters, if anyone wants to go read it and leave reviews like 'OMG11!!! U R Graet! Wat a good story! Rite mor k'' and stuff like that. :)
The second after I posted it, I noticed something amiss with the syntax, and tried to replace it, but last time I checked it was still my first version, so you may notice a couple of glaring errors - wrong commas, and one sentence made it sound like the lake was surrounded by girls, not Lily. Hopefully the proper version will be along shortly.
I totally loved how Rory gained the upper hand with Logan. I'm sure he totally expected her to get all blubbery when she saw him with that other girl, so he could be condecending and remind her that he warned her he'd be a total dick. But Rory sucked it up and went to the party with another boy, and I say more power to her. Party of the least interest is the party with the most power, and Rory totally won that round. I would be willing to be that entire storyline was written by someone who didn't do that when she was in college and wished she did. Some people complain that Rory is being too slutty and stuff, but I find the whole college life thing to be portrayed very realistically.
Right. Wasted enough time. Back to work.
The second after I posted it, I noticed something amiss with the syntax, and tried to replace it, but last time I checked it was still my first version, so you may notice a couple of glaring errors - wrong commas, and one sentence made it sound like the lake was surrounded by girls, not Lily. Hopefully the proper version will be along shortly.
I totally loved how Rory gained the upper hand with Logan. I'm sure he totally expected her to get all blubbery when she saw him with that other girl, so he could be condecending and remind her that he warned her he'd be a total dick. But Rory sucked it up and went to the party with another boy, and I say more power to her. Party of the least interest is the party with the most power, and Rory totally won that round. I would be willing to be that entire storyline was written by someone who didn't do that when she was in college and wished she did. Some people complain that Rory is being too slutty and stuff, but I find the whole college life thing to be portrayed very realistically.
Right. Wasted enough time. Back to work.