The Pilot Episode, part two

So, I wrote more.

Any suggestions on the old band name? I always thought Thrushcross Grange would be a cool name, but people tell me it is too hard to say. But it's just pretentious enough, don't you think?

Anyway, more of the scene

( Eddie and Denver )

My sister actually dated a boy called Denver.

Is this funny enough, do you think? I'm going with hour long 'Dramady" like Gilmore Girls

The Pilot Episode, part two

So, I wrote more.

Any suggestions on the old band name? I always thought Thrushcross Grange would be a cool name, but people tell me it is too hard to say. But it's just pretentious enough, don't you think?

Anyway, more of the scene

( Eddie and Denver )

My sister actually dated a boy called Denver.

Is this funny enough, do you think? I'm going with hour long 'Dramady" like Gilmore Girls