Yay, I'm writing again

Feeling embiggened by everyone's encouragement, I actually got a very rough draft of a first chapter of the Immortal Agency thing I was talking about, and I'd love opinions on it.

Very rough first draft, as I said, but I like where it is going so far. I love how, when you are writing, the characters just suggest themselves to you. It's like they are waiting there, somewhere, and as soon as you open your mind they pop out saing, 'here I am, let me tell you about me.'

Anyway...for anyone interested here it is, ( Immortal Agency Thingy )