Charlie's story

[charliesmum]

Last night Charlie started writing a story:

Charlie Fynazia and Josiah .
1.One day we were at the beach I was making a palace.
Done said Charlie.Fynazia is red Josiah is yellow & Charlie is blue.
Fynazia and Josiah were playing beach ball.Said Charlie
We are in the palace.We have to get to the top of the palace.
Lets go said Fynazia (going) & were here.
Charlie had a headake.
2.Key $1000.00(Colorrsheens)Billions of 1000 dollors
CEGC WOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH look were we are at said josiah
Lets collect shells.Said Fynazia.
(Finding).Think that’s it?

Comments

[thenorthernline.livejournal.com]

It's like an e.e. cummings poem!

[carlanime.livejournal.com]

It's like a vidoegame, or a painting -- very very visual, and with a feeling of "interaction" and of things happening.

Neat.

[chavvah.livejournal.com]

You should try and get it published in a postmodern journal.

I know some people from university who write just like that, and everyone talks about how brilliant they are.

[agatha-s.livejournal.com]

Three children building a palace of sand and then suddenly appearing inside the palace is a great idea for a story!
How did Charlie come up with the name Fynazia?

[cabenson.livejournal.com]

I say it again, Charlie is Teh Bomb! Did he make the drawing in the icon? If so, does he take requests?

[teh-dale.livejournal.com]

That's very cool. It has a stream-of-consciousness thing going.

[jessii-6.livejournal.com]

I find it interesting how Charlie connects dollors and Cegc Wosh....