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Words, Words, Words, Words
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2006-11-06 09:07 pm (UTC)
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One bit of Constructive Crit.
You say "The Addisons and the Holtons are descended from Harrison Woodlawn,” And then you go into a long description of the Addisons, but you never mention the Holtons again. You might want to fix that.
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on 2006-11-06 09:07 pm (UTC)You say "The Addisons and the Holtons are descended from Harrison Woodlawn,” And then you go into a long description of the Addisons, but you never mention the Holtons again. You might want to fix that.